Unhealthy food has negative effect on both individuals and on the society they live in. Some people think that the government should tax the unhealthy food while others say that fat tax is unfair an unnecessary. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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There is a flood of junk
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in today's time. Consuming
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food
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can leave a negative impact on the
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of a person. There are a bunch of people who consider posing
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on
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food
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items whereas many invariably believe that
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should not be a right step and not mandatory. I inarguably support the former opinion and would throw light on both views but justify my opinion with valid reasonings.
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with, processed
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as burger, pizza, taco, etc. are easily accessible and those who are travelling may choose
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as the most convenient option when hunger strikes.
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leads to munching on items that can cause long term effects on one's body.
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ealthy option in the most unfavourable conditions and instant noodles may be the only option to rely upon.
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, imposing an erroneous amount of
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would not be considered idle.
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, opting for fried
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can have an adverse effect on our
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and can lead to many
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problems which
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high cholesterol, high blood pressure, diabetes etc. and are on the rise.
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, a recent study conducted by a men's
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magazine has stated that India is among the highest countries with the most number of diabetic patients.
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has compelled the government to take stringent measures
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as adding a fat
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that can limit many from buying processed
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.
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, a high duty fee is
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added on top of it to make a buyer think twice before adding those in their shopping list. In conclusion, despite
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the fact that imposing a fat
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may not be justified in many situations
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, it can be beneficial in limiting the consumption of unhealthy items in daily lifestyle.
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, I strongly support the major step taken by our
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ministers.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • public health policy
  • lifestyle diseases
  • obesity
  • cardiovascular diseases
  • diabetes
  • sin tax
  • regressive taxation
  • discretionary spending
  • consumer behavior
  • economic burden
  • preventative measures
  • nutritional education
  • health promotion
  • subsidies
  • socioeconomic disparities
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