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In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case ? Do you think this a positive or negative situation ?

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Selecting a place to live in is a very big
dicision
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decision
 to make. In some parts of the world
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the
people
 value their own
accomodation
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accommodation
 because it is a sense of
achievemet
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achievement
 rather than renting which could not save money. living in a personal house can make
people
 feel
fullfilment
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fulfilment
. I will give my stance regarding
this
 topic in
this
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To begin
 with,
an
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individuals
seek
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 to own their personal
accomodation
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accommodation
, where they could live with peace of mind.
Although
 they may struggle and face many hardships to
accquire
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acquire
 it. Many
people
 have a desire to have their own
accomodation
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accommodation
. In many countries
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for Instance
,
people
 mortgage and take bank loans to purchase houses. Whereas, a
tetant
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tenant
testament
 not only has to follow the landlord's rules and regulations but
also
 has no previlliage to renovate according to his need.
Thus
, it is imperative to have a personal house where
one
 can live happily without
intervations
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interventions
intervention
 of others.
Nonetheless
,having a personal
recidency
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residency
residence
 has many positive aspects.
Such
 as, it gives
feedom
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freedom
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one
individuals
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does
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 not bind to any rules and he has
oppertunity
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opportunity
 to renovate frequently. Taking myself as an example when I was
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 in Auborn Australia, I can not even move a sofa set to another room from
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drawing-room
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d
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rawing room. Though, personal
accomodation
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accommodation
 is necessary to thrive in
a
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society.
Thus
,having
a
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an
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 own
recidency
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residency
residence
 is very important to
an individuals
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individuals
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. It make will make you feel more
relaxd
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relaxed
 rather than renting. As
teatnt
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treatment
that
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you do not have to follow the strict rules. Owing
a
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 own
accomodation
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accommodation
 gives a man freedom and
fullfillment
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fulfilment
 of life. To sum up,
one
 who want to either live in his own house or as a
tetant
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tenant
depands
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depends
 on
dewellers
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dwellers
. In my perspective, having a personal home
one
 individual's basic needs. It saves finance and
owing
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owning
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 a home is a natural human desire.
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I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • ownership
  • renting
  • importance
  • sense of security
  • stability
  • financial investment
  • asset
  • customize
  • decorate
  • belonging
  • community
  • potential
  • future generations
  • long-term
  • cost advantage
  • control
  • living space
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