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i. #Work | #Travel - In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantage of young people who decide to do this. (IELTS , AC)

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In a few nations,teenagers are encouraged to take a gap
year
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 after completing high school for work and travel, before making the move to start higher
education
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. The benefit from
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 trend young boys and girls can have an experience of real-life and drawback is they can miss the golden opportunity for getting scholarship or admission into a good university. On the
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 hand, if we look at the advantage that young people can take a real-life experience
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 before they choose what kinda study and a career, they are going to pursue. They can get a chance to learn from people around them, what people do to make living and why they took
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 career or job.
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, lots of young travellers come to New Zealand after finishing their high school
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, where they work and travel in different areas. In
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 way, they learn about different cultures, because New Zealand is a multicultural society.
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, if we look on the disadvantage of
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 12 month period away from study, one can miss the chance to get into the good
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 facility or can miss the golden opportunity of getting a scholarship.
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, the University of Auckland giving admission to the students, who have more than 70% marks in their high school studies. But
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year
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 it will be 75%.
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, if an intellectual took a
year
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 off from
education
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, he or she might not able to get admission in
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year
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 session.
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, after a
year
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 off from studies, some students may be not capable to learn with the same interest. In conclusion,
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 trend of taking a gap
year
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 can give a chance to young ones to get a real-life experience.
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, there are good chances of missing the golden opportunities and might not put the same efforts into the learning.
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