Education is not a luxury, but a basic human right and as such should be free for everyone irrespective of personal wealth. Do you agree or disagree?

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being is born with some fundamental
rights
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equality refers to the disadvantaged can enjoy the same life chances as everyone else. And
education
is one of the cornerstones of these
rights
. So, the
rights
to
education
should be the same life chance for all whether one is wealthy or not, I strongly believe.
Education
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ndividual’s personality, unlocks full potential, and prepares individuals to participate in
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society.
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to say that
education
ultimately thrives
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mankind. And it is our duty as
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uman being to foster mankind.
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many international organizations have already acknowledged
education
as the fundamental human
rights
. The Universal Declaration of Human
Rights
of
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nited Nations is a very good example here. According to
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article 26 of the declaration,
education
is treated as fundamental
rights
that it should be free for all, at least in the elementary level.
Similarly
,
education
should be free for all regardless of
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ndividual’s financial affluence.
This
is because,
education
, being the most crucial human
rights
, is extremely necessary for the exercise of all other human
rights
. It enlightens people that promote individual freedom and empowerment. Most importantly,
education
is a magical tool by which socially and economically marginalized individuals can lift themselves out of poverty and can act as
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ignified citizen. So,
education
is
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ilver bullet for combating against poverty and access to
education
is not prerogative of privileged circles of society. In fine, many people contend that
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ight to
education
or free
education
for all is not a realist idea. I strongly oppose their argument. A government, of course, cannot introduce an educational system
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, it takes money, and it takes time. But
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ight to
education
enforce a government to build an inclusive quality
education
system over a period of time.
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  • fundamental right
  • accessible
  • social mobility
  • personal and professional development
  • overall development
  • equality
  • social disparities
  • access
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