Some people think that it’s better to choose friends who always have the same opinions as them.  Other people believe that it’s good to have friends who sometimes disagree with them. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

A part of
people
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that is
beneficial to have friends who have
similiar
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similar
preferences in different fields , while in other's
opinion
within their peer
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group
should be individuals who sometimes disagree with the idea .
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essay will discuss both statements and reach a conclusion reflecting my
opinion
. On the one hand , humans
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to look for persons who have the same view to
build
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a friendship ,
thus
this
reassures them that their
opinion
is right .
This
is a positive
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for the
people
who mainly doubt themselves as well as for the individuals who are very
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stubborn
and as soon as they
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have
have a
certain impression created no one could change their mind .
Moreover
,
this
kind relationship is desirable for
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where is required a unique
opinion
,
therefore
the subjects could easily work together towards the same goal .
For instance
, a
sucesfull
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successful
business could be established by two individuals with the same ideas , whereas if they have different ones it could cause undesirable discussions .
On the other hand
, deciding to pair up with someone who disagrees
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could improve both individual's personal knowledge , since they can bring strong evidence to support the argument . In general two
people
cannot be the same and
this
could be a factor influenced by their past personal experiences . Another reason why is a positive choice to have friends with different opinions is the fact that
this
could show their involvement
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the relationship by presenting their point of view .
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it is highly desirable to have a personal conversation with someone who interacts by contradicting the idea , rather than just approving and showing no
interes
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interest
. In conclusion ,
although
some
people
support the idea of having friends with the same views , I personally believe that friendships were both parties have their own perspective are more beneficial for
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personal development .
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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