Some people think the main benefit of international cooperation is in the protection of the environment, while others think that the main benefits are in the world business. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is argued that the primary advantage of multinational

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is to the surroundings whilst, others disagree and believe that world

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is their number one objective.

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essay agrees with the argument that businesses are more benefited as they make a huge

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rather than the protection of the

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with, many people say that big

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help to protect the

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by funding various programmes and projects.

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, these

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companies

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donate thousands of dollar to the cause that protect the natural

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as helping for forestation. To exemplify, Coca-Cola, a world-renown multinational company spends 15% of its total

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(which is equal to millions) annually to plant trees in the deforested areas of the world.

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way

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is benefited by the big cooperations.

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the giant cooperations mainly focus on making a

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and their own

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because millions of dollars are invested in the firm.

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is to say that, thousands of people put their money on these

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expecting to get

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so the

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and foremost goal is making money for the investors.

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, if a multinational company does not make a

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the investors and shareholders begin to withdraw their capital from the

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, which can result in the closure of the firm.

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, international businesses primarily target to earn a

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than

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, contribute to protecting the

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. In conclusion, global

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can greatly help to protect the

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by funding various programmes that work to save the

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.

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, international firms

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work to get

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and

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benefit

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world because of the pressure from the investors to raise the money back

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only they can offer their help to safeguard the surroundings.