The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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In the picture below are presented

two

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maps that show the

road

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access to a city hospital from

two

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different periods, 2007 and 2010. The city hospital on the Ring

Road

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, as shown on the

apper

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upper

paper

side of the picture that depicts the

area

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structure from 2007, had

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a verry

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verry

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very

basic

ifrustructure

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infrastructure

in that period. The facilities of the hospital included a few simple parts: the building of the hospital itself, the parking slots for the staff and public between City

Road

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and Ring

Road

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, and six bus stops on the Hospital

Road

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. Since 2007 the entire

area

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was changed

dramaticaly

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dramatically

. The parking

area

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was

separadet

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separated

separate

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into

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two

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different parking parks, one for the staff of the hospital and another for public use.

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Instead

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,Instead

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bus stops the bus station

was build

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was built

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on the other side

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that

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than

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was before. In order to manage traffic properly in

this

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new busy

area

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two

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roundabouts were

build

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built

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according to

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new

standarts

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standards

. As can be seen from the description, the new hospital's facilities have

advanced

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an advanced

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and more appropriate structure.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 100%.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words two, road, area with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

175 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

traffic flow
road access
ring road
bus stops
bus station
congestion
parking facilities
pedestrian crossings
vehicular flow
organizational structure
accessibility
enhancements
configuration
dedicated
diverting traffic

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