The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
In the picture below are presented
two
maps that show the road
access to a city hospital from two
different periods, 2007 and 2010.
The city hospital on the Ring Road
, as shown on the apper
side of the picture that depicts the Correct your spelling
upper
paper
area
structure from 2007, had Correct article usage
a verry
verry
basic Correct your spelling
very
ifrustructure
in that period. The facilities of the hospital included a few simple parts: the building of the hospital itself, the parking slots for the staff and public between City Correct your spelling
infrastructure
Road
and Ring Road
, and six bus stops on the Hospital Road
.
Since 2007 the entire area
was changed dramaticaly
. The parking Correct your spelling
dramatically
area
was separadet
Correct your spelling
separated
separate
to
Change preposition
into
two
different parking parks, one for the staff of the hospital and another for public use. Instead
bus stops the bus station Add a comma
,Instead
was build
on the other side Change the verb form
was built
that
Correct word choice
than
is
was before. In order to manage traffic properly in Correct your spelling
it
this
new busy area
, two
roundabouts were build
, Wrong verb form
built
according to
new standarts
.
As can be seen from the description, the new hospital's facilities have Correct your spelling
standards
advanced
and more appropriate structure.Add an article
an advanced
Submitted by kvainer on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 100%.
▼
Vocabulary: Replace the words two, road, area with synonyms.
▼
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
▼