The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
In the picture below are presented
two
maps that show the
road
access to a city hospital from
two
different periods, 2007 and 2010. The city hospital on the Ring
Road
, as shown on the
apper
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upper
paper
side of the picture that depicts the
area
structure from 2007, had
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a verry
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verry
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very
basic
ifrustructure
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infrastructure
in that period. The facilities of the hospital included a few simple parts: the building of the hospital itself, the parking slots for the staff and public between City
Road
and Ring
Road
, and six bus stops on the Hospital
Road
. Since 2007 the entire
area
was changed
dramaticaly
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dramatically
. The parking
area
was
separadet
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separated
separate
to
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two
different parking parks, one for the staff of the hospital and another for public use.
Instead
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bus stops the bus station
was build
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on the other side
that
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is
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it
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was before. In order to manage traffic properly in
this
new busy
area
,
two
roundabouts were
build
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,
according to
new
standarts
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standards
. As can be seen from the description, the new hospital's facilities have
advanced
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an advanced
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and more appropriate structure.
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