Missions to explore space are hugely expensive, and there are problems on Earth which demand attention. The number of these missions needs to be reduced. Do you agree or disagree?

Discovering outer space through rockets and other means are costly and are

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affecting the environment which

need

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attention to decrease various useless missions.I reckon,the more times the rockets are launched,the more it will

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to

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the

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nature and human life and

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result

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great

loss

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of capital.

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and foremost,from the day of

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to the day of launch,

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amount of money is required to complete the whole task while sometime the test could not get success.

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means,if the test got failed

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there is maximum chance of

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whole structure at a fraction of time resulting

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of huge money which indirectly affects

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the economy.

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,many countries

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their huge portion of

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the budget

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after getting unsuccessful launch causing significance change on the economic status of the government.

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,only

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missions should be done so that great

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can be minimized.

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,the huge amount of gas is burnt while

launcing

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launching

a

space craft

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which directly or indirectly

impact

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towards

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the

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nature.The high amount of energy is required to leave the

earth

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for rockets where maximum fuel is used resulting dust and dangerous gases as a drain which is harmful

for

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environment

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the environment

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as well as all the living creatures on

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.Because of

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,

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rare flora and fauna are

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the verge of extinction.By reducing

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missions,it can help to promote

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conserving those resources found on

earth

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. In conclusion,doing

plethora

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of rocket launching programmes is

great

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a great

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loss

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of income as huge capital should be allocated to complete a mission and the huge portion of

drain

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the drain

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in the form of smoke released from those are degrading the quality of life on

earth

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