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Modern life has resulted in many improvements in people's standard of living. Despite this, many people feel that life is more stressful now than it was in the past. What are the possible causes and consequences relating to this statement? Can you suggest appropriate solutions?

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There are plenty of changes in human's lives today
that is
 being done to establish all comfortable conditions.
However
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 their lives are under a lot of stress compare to the past.
This
 essay will consider two causes of
this
 issue and two possible solutions. One of the most vital reason is changing priorities. In the past, choosing relatives
instead
 of building
own
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 career was the biggest moral of each person. Despite
of
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the fact that men were supposed to be taken part in the war,
worriors
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warriors
 always had to come back to their close
people
. In order to succeed in their future job,
people
 often ignore the importance of support and spending time with family that can
leads
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 to
inability
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an inability
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 to deal with mental health problems on their own. Another key factor is low self-esteem. Nowadays while using social
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media
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medias
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media
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 is getting quickly developed,
people
 are trying to meet
standards
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the standards
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 of
modern
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 world. Modern standards include
such
criterias
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criteria
 as being productive at work
twenty four
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 by seven, being socially active and having prosperity in other spheres of life.
People
 quite often are not properly informed how they should keep
balance
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 between hard work and rest.
Average
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 person is not able to work nonstop without getting exhausted, that means
mostly
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people
 let themselves to throw them into
such
 turmoil.
Furtunately
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Fortunately
Unfortunately
, there are two possible solutions to these problems.
First
 of all,
people
 better to spend time with family and try to regularly gather with relatives.
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