What is better: a job one likes or a job that pays well? Do you agree or disagree with these statement ?

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Growing up, I heard that “paying well, what is wrong with that”.
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, not ever
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claim is true. When we are young, our parents, in general always asking us to put a
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of effort in studies in order to reach a good
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and build an excellent
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. But, sometimes people don´t matter either good jobs or successful
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. Personally, I disagree with these statement, and I feel
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way for three reasons: people must choice their
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with your own decision, never be influence by someone when choice a
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and, think in a long term when choose a
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.
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, the young, when it is looking for a
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, almost ever it is being influenced by someone. Families, friends or a colleague. It is happen seeking as well in undergraduate courses.
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, I have a friend whose their profession is a Dentistry. He asks for his son to apply for a Dentistry course.
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, it is clearly that, his son doesn´t like at all these course, but the kid has scary to tell for her father that don´t like these possible
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. Usually, it is a very common situation, and almost ever, parents waste
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,
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, some times we want to compare with another people, and because of
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we choose a
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only for the
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, and it is always become a burden.
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, I have a sister that choose a good
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in a Physical therapy clinic. That was recommended by in a her friend, which tell for her that she was receiving a
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of
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.
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, her boos every day put a
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of patients in her timetable. My sister, tell me so work that couldn´t lunch, sometimes. But she had a good
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, so she kept the same situation for four or five. On day , the good
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, didn´t more sense, because she was spending a
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of
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, taking care her health with, medicines and Psychologists.
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, whether we don’t considered a long term in our
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, will be impossible planning a something.
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, I had an work when I finished the undergraduation.I had a good
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as well.
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, I didn’t directs of employee,
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as; holiday; extra
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; medical insurance and, public transport voucher. It was very danger, because I wasn’t thinking in a future. Only enjoy the present, whitout planning my future. In conclusion, we have , always review the possibilities of work, courses and university. Recognize if it is exactly what I have for the rest of life. In my opinion, the life is not so short for restart, as many times as it is takes.
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, each restart is more difficult. Sometimes by the age, sometimes by over out opinions. But, the true of our track, always will be done by good and planned choices.
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