Some people think certain prisoners should be made to set up unpaid community work, instead of just being put behind the bars. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It has been argued that not all criminals should be sentenced to

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. According to some people, people who have committed lower offences should be allowed to take part in the

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by doing unpaid

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and not be put in

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thought as I believe

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will help both individual and the

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.

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sentence is not always the best solution and some offender should be given a

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chance.

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includes youth who have been under influence of the peers and those who have been committed to crime due to severe mental health disorders.By giving them an unpaid

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in the

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, we will help them a chance to improve their behaviours and start a new life.

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when an offender is remorse for what has done and is trying to change.

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, in some countries like China,

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take part in

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services

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for a period of 2 years before being able to apply for a paid

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they must be working under the supervision and should be sending their monthly behavioural report to the court.

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will give them another chance.

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, by working for free they will have a good opportunity to show their society they have changed. Society will improve by receiving some unpaid

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is certainly true when there is a shortage of worker in some area

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construction of city infrastructure.

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is particularly true in some jobs are demanding.

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, some governments use

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for building railroads and highways to connect cities. By using

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can cut some of its expenses and get the

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done faster. As a

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result society will improve

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of

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free service jobs. In conclusion, I do advocate for the idea that some

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should be working for

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of spending their time in

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because it helps both individual and

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to grow.