More children in developed countries are becoming overweight. This is a serious problem for wealthy countries. Discuss some causes and effects of this problem. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant example from your own knowledge or experience.

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Nowadays many young
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are facing
obesity
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and it is increasing alarmingly in all the grown countries. It is a major concern across the globe.
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causes of overweighting of
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and
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a few major effects with obese.
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and foremost, why many children are suffering from fatness? One of the main causes of
obesity
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is junk
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and no physical activity. In
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context, countless young
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are not eating proper hygienic
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as in developed countries both the parents are working and busy with their office commitments, they could not spend time to cook healthy
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for their
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. Children are not allocating spare time to exercising
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they are investing maximum duration on television, laptops and video games etc.
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, more young people are attracted to fast foods like pizza, burgers as well as soft drinks that
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to more
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.
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, if
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the juvenile
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is suffering from overweight
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it has severe effects as well. Mainly, many youngsters are suffering from diabetics and
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attack.
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to adults,
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kids
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are facing
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attack in young age because of unhealthy
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and diabetics count in
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growing rapidly
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the world. It is the major concern in
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the younger
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generation.
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, recently one college student is suffering from excess overweight from childhood
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he got
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stroke in young age and is
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in critical
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kids
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are facing
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stroke etc across the nation. To overcome
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concern, parents need to play
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significant role in their children healthy life and younger generation makes
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strong.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • obesity
  • sedentary
  • caloric intake
  • processed foods
  • fast food culture
  • screen time
  • metabolic disorders
  • healthcare expenditure
  • lifestyle diseases
  • preventative strategies
  • nutritional education
  • public health policy
  • body mass index (BMI)
  • emotional well-being
  • stigmatization
  • exercise regimen
  • eating habits
  • junk food
  • socioeconomic factors
  • health literacy
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