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Some people believed that studying literature is important for individual character building while others think it’s a wastage of time. Discuss both point of views and give your opinion?

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Literature has knowledge about history, culture and traditions. One portion of the society is in the favour of reading literature while another portion has an opposite opinion.
This
 essay will intend to analyze both views along with my perspective.
Firstly
, people can admire strong personalities from autobiographies. From these ,resources they are learned about the struggle and hurdles that have been tackled by them on the way to get success. so, that works as inspiration to do hard-work in their life and adopt good habits from their stories. Reading about history helps to keep with the roots of the culture and traditions and readers can learn from the past mistakes and that makes them sufficient to make a wise decision and teaches how to distinguish between right and wrong. That quality makes readers wiser while they are tacking their decision.
For example
, with the modernization the way of living has been changed dramatically so, to analyze the graph of revolution people should know about the past as well.
Secondly
, delivery of culture from one generation to another the best mode is writing so, that nobody can change them for their advantages.
Moreover
, to have an interest in reading polish knowledge and reading skills that helps individuals in their academic performance and raise the level of confidence in readers.
For example
, students can learn different vocabulary, writing style and that contributes to surge the level of concentration while doing a study. On the other side, people think it is not profitable
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 today's life because there are so much to do in
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 fast running world for survival. Even students can lack in their studies of they spend much time in literature books
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