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Nowadays more people get married to someone of a different culture than they ever did. Discuss both benefits and demerits of these trend.

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In recent years,
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 number of
cross
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cross-culture
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culture
marriage
 is considered to be more common, so many grooms are married to other
culture
 brides compared to the past.
This
 essay will not only discuss
advantages
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the advantages
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 associated with
this
 trend but its disadvantage will
also
 be highlighted. Despite the disadvantage below, there are more noticeable except with support to Inter caste
marriage
. one of the
Most
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most
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 rewarding features of the subject is that people who get married with
different
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a different
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culture
 in order to know about the tradition,
culture
, belief and language.
This
 is because They have become
open minded
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, more tolerant and giving
neutral
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a neutral
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 opinion about other religions rather than biased view.
Moreover
, people have different strength based on their
culture
, race, geographic location and family.
As a result
, she
turn
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 off
cross
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cross-culture
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culture
 couples are stronger diverse and have diverse capabilities. On the other hand,
cross
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cross-culture
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culture
marriage
 can bring some drawbacks as well. a frequent criticism about
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the subject
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 is that family and relatives
are not accept
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are not accepted
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 them. To elaborate, They have
misconception
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a misconception
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 about other
culture
 And keep the distance from the couple or forced bride to accept
alien
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the alien
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culture
.
In addition
,
Other
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 demotivating feature to consider is that some
culture
have
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 lost their
religion
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 tradition and chance to extinction because of
inter caste
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inter-caste
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marriage
. In concussion,
although
cross
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cross-culture
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culture
marriage
 has numerous benefits, there are some downsides
can
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that can
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 not be overlooked.
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