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Fast food is now universally in most countries and is becoming increasingly popular. Some feel that this is a positive trend, while others do not. What are your opinions in this??

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Although
 the trend of frozen and ready to eat meals are booming nowadays in the world ,while others still believe that homemade
food
 is the best. I will discuss both the view and my opinion on
this
 essay.
To begin
 with ,there are a lot of
people
 who believe that rising fast
food
 industry made peoples life easy , they
also
 think that ready-made
food
 save their
time
 of cooking and they can use that
time
 in some productive work.For instinct,the corporate women do not have
time
 to cook ,so they buy
food
 from Mc Donal's.so its
time
 saving,
moreover
 frozen
food
 and junk
food
 are accessible in each and every corner of the world.Another reason is that it is cheap
then
 the fresh
food
 .The frozen sandwich is available in the market just for $5, which save
people
time
 and cooking preparation .
On the other hand
 ,there are many think that frozen and junk
food
 are unhealthy and one should avoid a packed meal. they argue that eating fast
food
 every day is not good for the human body, there are many health risks associated with that. For example, eating everyday pizza and burger can lead to obesity or heart disease. so
people
 should eat healthy and homemade
food
.
In addition
 , frozen and fast
food
 is made up of expired ingredient ,and they are not rich in nutrition too.
for example
, the burger does not contain lots of calories but it does not contain any essential protein and vitamins.it is better to prepare a meal at home and take it to the workplace. To conclude , fast
food
 are popular ,but it is unhealthy to eat every day, In my opinion eating fresh
food
 is better than fast
food
,
people
 should
also
 think before buying it as a meal.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Obesity epidemic
  • Processed foods
  • Nutritional value
  • Chronic diseases
  • Cultural homogenization
  • Lifestyle changes
  • Economic impact
  • Job creation
  • Environmental degradation
  • Sustainability
  • Dietary habits
  • Consumerism
  • Mass production
  • Public health
  • Health-conscious
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