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In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem?

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Nowadays, there has commonly been a huge debate about the reasons for hunger around the world. As we know, the amount of produced food has increased in the
last
 decade,
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 the rate of huger globally are still high. The main purpose of
this
 essay is to discuss the main causes of poverty and find a solution
such
 as reduce wasting food and provide aids to poorer countries. It is evident that in a poor country
such
 as Somalia, people still die of hunger, the reason for
that is
, they do not have that much knowledge of how to plant type of food that can be used in
this
 difficult situation.
Moreover
, as a
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 they face many problems in terms of agriculture, namely contaminated water, draught and costly seeds. The
second
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 the civil war in
this
 area has grown in the past years. In the other
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 it means that the government do not have the ability to concentrate on the essential elements for their nation.
Furthermore
, they need extremely help from a developed country
such
 as The UK and The USA, to be able to deter
this
 phenomenon.
For example
, sending experts in the field of agriculture to examine the problem and trying to fix it. in terms of solution, the government ought to help the farmers to plant their lands, which they can provide clear water and supplied them with various kind of seeds. To illustrate, if the authorities give the farmers loan to facilitate these issues.
Secondly
, individuals should
also
 take responsibility for creating new methods to help everyone in solving these negative aspects mentioned earlier.
Finally
, it is vital that action is taken to combat the above problems.
Therefore
, developed governments should ensure that adequate legislation and controls are in place to prevent
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further
 issue in the future. To sum up, from what was discussed there are many causes in regards to hunger problems, as a
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 we need to collaborate to prevent
this
 in the coming days.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • inequality
  • distribution
  • access to resources
  • climate change
  • natural disasters
  • political factors
  • economic factors
  • agricultural practices
  • infrastructure
  • transportation
  • population growth
  • education
  • knowledge
  • food waste
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