Some people think that all teenagers should be required to do unpaid work in their free time to help the local community. They believe this would benefit both the indivi

pinions are divided as to whether adolescents should spend their leisure
time
on helping the local community without payments or not. Some hold a belief that it merits not only individually but
also
socially. Personally, I completely disagree with
this
point of view. For a variety of reasons, it would be wrong to force young students to do unpaid works for the local
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their school break.
Firstly
, teenagers are at the age of learning and they have to meet quite a lot of deadlines for homework. If they take
time
out to do unrelated jobs, there will not be
time
left for their study and some other activities for the comprehensive development,
such
as doing
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activities, playing sport and so forth.
Therefore
, occupying their little free
time
is obviously not proper and unfair.
Secondly
, teenagers may not be physically strong enough and lack the necessary
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skills.
This
may easily lead to unwanted accidents at workplaces.
Finally
, the local residents are able to ask for help from diverse resources even without any effort rather than taking advantage of the young, and it may yield a much better result. In my opinion, adolescents who help their community as a workforce do not benefit from what they do and they even will be the low-quality employees in the future society. In fact, learning is the most effective way of generating a well-educated workforce for the contemporary economy and educating good citizens for a healthy society. Case in point, in numerous parts of Vietnam, the young aged around 15 to 20 are considering making ends meet top priority, and
this
situation is originating the fact that they are not qualified and
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enough as requirements of most enterprises.
As a result
, their applications were denied because of lacking a sense of discipline and
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skills. In conclusion, the choice of whether helping the local or not belongs to teenagers, but I believe that we should not require them to do works which are others' responsibility.
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