Some people think that all teenagers should be required to do unpaid work in their free time to help the local community. They believe this would benefit both the indivi

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on helping the local community without payments or not. Some hold a belief that it merits not only individually but

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socially. Personally, I completely disagree with

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point of view. For a variety of reasons, it would be wrong to force young students to do unpaid works for the local

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their school break.

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, teenagers are at the age of learning and they have to meet quite a lot of deadlines for homework. If they take

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out to do unrelated jobs, there will not be

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left for their study and some other activities for the comprehensive development,

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activities, playing sport and so forth.

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, occupying their little free

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is obviously not proper and unfair.

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, teenagers may not be physically strong enough and lack the necessary

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skills.

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may easily lead to unwanted accidents at workplaces.

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, the local residents are able to ask for help from diverse resources even without any effort rather than taking advantage of the young, and it may yield a much better result. In my opinion, adolescents who help their community as a workforce do not benefit from what they do and they even will be the low-quality employees in the future society. In fact, learning is the most effective way of generating a well-educated workforce for the contemporary economy and educating good citizens for a healthy society. Case in point, in numerous parts of Vietnam, the young aged around 15 to 20 are considering making ends meet top priority, and

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situation is originating the fact that they are not qualified and

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enough as requirements of most enterprises.

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, their applications were denied because of lacking a sense of discipline and

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skills. In conclusion, the choice of whether helping the local or not belongs to teenagers, but I believe that we should not require them to do works which are others' responsibility.