Some people believe that celebrating personal events is a waste of money. Others feel that these celebrations play an important role in the lives of individuals and in society as a whole. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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importance of celebrating functions in one's life. Some believe that celebration can only lead to
money
wastage whereas another group of thinkers support stating enjoyment is of utmost importance in an individuals life and in the social aspect.
However
, both has its own pros and cons.
Therefore
, before commenting on my decision, both the opinions would be discussed. Examining the former opinion, the primary thought the supporters would put forward is one should preserve their hard-earned
money
for the betterment of future rather than spending it on the occasions which can just lead to temporary happiness.
Moreover
, no matter how grand the event is celebrated, people are sure to point out mistakes. So why to spend so much unnecessarily for others who are ultimately ungrateful.
In addition
, people
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scenarios like pandemic they should be more
carefull
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careful
while spending
money
.
On the contrary
, the view
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that celebrations create memories because of
this
everyone should prefer to cherish these moments
instead
of thinking about
money
.
Besides
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they
also
feel having big fat weddings can make a huge difference in
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society.
Also
, they socially superior
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others.
For instance
, in India people follow the practice of having
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wedding celebration and eventually proving to be socially more powerful. To conclude and give my opinion, I would say that celebrating any occasions in life with lesser expenditure is the most ideal way to deal with any situation. In a big picture,
this
would help an individual to save on
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future without having any stress for their retirement.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • lavish parties
  • essential expenditures
  • financial stress
  • lasting memories
  • social bonds
  • emotional support
  • familial and social ties
  • mental health
  • community cohesion
  • cultural heritage
  • sense of identity
  • traditional practices
  • sense of belonging
  • continuity
  • unique cultural aspects
  • personal well-being
  • routine
  • life satisfaction
  • reasonable budget
  • cost-effective
  • potluck parties
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