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What are the advantages and disadvantages of learning it at adulthood? Many people believe that learning a language at childhood is much easier than at adulthood.

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It is believed that learning a terminology can be easy at an early age. There is an array of factors which are important considering that situation as advantages and disadvantages. On the one hand, children seizing opportunity learning another
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 than the main
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 can have a lot of merits.
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 and foremost, these people gain self-confidence being an essential part of human life
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, learning a
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 contribute to meet a new culture. Teenagers can have good grammar and accent depending on
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 person and method. Equally importantly, it is claimed that people, especially the younger generation can learn a new
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 much easier than in adulthood. If we compare the learning speed of children and adults, we can say that there is a big distinction.
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 learners at a young age might know a lot of vocabularies
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. Take an early
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 person will be able to have more self-confidence, wide perspective and active in classes with other peers.
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,
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, if someone tells the child why they are having trouble learning, the learner can be afraid
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and hesitates to speak. For that reason, a good development may consequence merit. Time must give to the child in the
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, the advantages cannot be ignored, the important thing is to manage the process correctly.
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