Some people think that computers are more of a hindrance than a help in today’s society. Others believe that they are such indispensable tools that they would not be able to live or work without them. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In the tech-savvy

world

, technology, especially

computers

, has made its place in every

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of

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life. Some people believe that

computers

are more like a problem rather than

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useful device whereas others, including me, argue against

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notion. In

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essay, I will discuss both the viewpoints with relevant examples.

To begin

with,

computers

are acting like a

hinderance

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hindrance

in many ways.

First

of all, because of

computers

, unemployment increases in developing nations.

This

is because many multi-nationals companies are using the

comptuers

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computers

to do their daily task because of less time consuming and

high profit

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margins. So, in society, jobs are very few, which directly leads to unemployment. Apart from

this

, children, who are using

computers

excessively may become addicted

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online surfing, and

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would definitely

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in less cohesive society in a long run.

For example

, research showed that nearly 35% of teenagers are trapped in a virtual

world

, and hardly spent time with their family members. On the other side, people, including me, believe that

computers

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made the individual's life convenient and comfortable. By saying so, I mean that

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everything is one click away from buying and selling. People can buy

grocerries

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groceries

, clothes, houses or cars

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while sitting on their bed.

Furthermore

, with the assistance of

computers

, education has become available to every person. In

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general words, anyone can study in a well-known

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university from their home, and pursue their career in any field.

For instance

, in the pandemic situation, when everyone is under lockdown,

computers

become the bridge between teachers and students to complete their school curriculum. To conclude, undoubtedly,

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computers

are creating some social problems in society

such

as unemployment and addiction among young adults, but the benefits of having them in community, especially in the contemporary

world

, is very valuable in

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every

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.