In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

The new innovations and
technologies
will replace printed newspapers or books in the future and make them more accessible for
wide
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range of people. The
technologies
are developing in
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way. The
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lifes
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of
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a significant change over the
last
100 year due to new innovations and discoveries. We can see backwards of it nowadays.
For instance
, we are often searching a lot of information by surfing the network
instead
of going to the library. We can study remotely only because of
development
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and advancement of
technologies
. The new
technologies
make our life
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comfortable and
opens
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a lot of doors of opportunities for us. We can easily find
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books or
knowledges
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instead
of buying it in stores. Nowadays everyone can get access to the information that was constraint just
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years ago.
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, people who are making arts can find creatures of famous art makers around the world and get inspiration and motivation from it
instead
of going to museums and paying for it.
Furthermore
, he can communicate with him and get consultation even if he located on the other side of Earth. The new
technologies
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our Lifes in a good way. Now we can get books or information online, using modern innovations without paying and other problems.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accessibility
  • convenience
  • cost-effective
  • cultural value
  • sentimental value
  • reliability
  • distracting
  • access to
  • digital devices
  • internet
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