Most societies has its homeless people. Some people think that the best way to help them is to give them money. To what extent do you agree?
Throughout the
world
there are numerous Add a comma
,world
people
living in poor conditions and homeless situation. Part of the population believes that the best measure to help them is offering money
; while others defend that different approaches would be more effective. This
essay totally stand
for the necessity of supporting homeless Change the verb form
stands
people
without giving them money
and the reason why will be explained in the next
paragraphs.
To begin
with, supporters of giving homeless people
money
defend that extremely poor people
have difficulties to find paid opportunities to work. Therefore
, they suffer from lack
of resources to buy simple things Add an article
a lack
such
as toothbrush or soap. Furthermore
, there is something more important, which is the dignity aspect that also
should be considered. When giving money
to homeless people
you allow them to choose what they want to buy, eat or wear, instead
of treating them as pets who must use or eat whatever is offered to them.
Nevertheless
, altough
the aspect of dignity is plausible, it is Correct your spelling
although
also
true that homeless people
, sometimes, face addiction problems and are constantly found using drugs or alchool
Correct your spelling
alcohol
on
public spaces. Change preposition
in
Therefore
, offering homeless people
paid opportunities to accomplish simple tasks such
as carrying groceries or maintaining the backyard grass Correct your spelling
cutting
cutted
could be more important for their self-esteem and efficient to stimulate them to change their situation. A study published by psychologists in Britain showed that what bothers homeless Correct your spelling
cut
people
the most is not being able to maitaining
their expenses with their own hands.
To summarize, Correct your spelling
maintaining
although
it is possible to highlight some positive effects of giving homeless people
money
, I totally agree that offering them simple
paid opportunities could reflect more benefits for their self-esteem and push them to change their life situation.Change the adjective
simply
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