A friend you made while you were studying abroad has written to ask you for help in finding a job in your country. You have heard about a job in a local company that might be suitable for him/her. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter: tell your friend about the job and what sort of work it involves say why you think the job would be suitable for him/her explain how to apply for the job Write at least 150 words.
Dear John,
I hope
this
letter finds you in good health and best of spirits. It's been a long time since we caught up and finally
, I have got the opportunity to see you again after our university. But, I was quite astonished after reading your letter that you are moving to India for a job
.
Since the time I received your letter, I have continuously looked for work for you and I came across a job
as a sales consultant in a well-known Honda company located in Dehli, India. This
is a quite big firm selling cars so, you will be paid a good salary.
Well, I have read your resume, and based on your previous 2 years of experience with Volkaswagan in Japan, I thought this
would be a suitable job
for you. Furthermore
, you have excellent communication skills along with
a good proficiency in the English language.
It is quite easy to apply for this
job
, you can visit their website online at http://hondajobs.cars.com. After visiting this
website, you can select the nation in which you are looking for a job
and you can provide your details to apply for it.
I hope this
might help you. I'm waiting to see you.
Yours loving,
Navneet Kaur.Submitted by ss6802125 on
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coherence cohesion
Try to incorporate more transition phrases to enhance the flow between paragraphs and ideas.
task achievement
Consider providing slightly more detail about the job responsibilities to further strengthen the task achievement.
greeting and closing
You have a clear opening and closing, setting a friendly tone.
complete response
You effectively addressed all parts of the task in a structured manner.
logical structure
The paragraphs are well-organized, each with a clear focus.
suitable writing tone
Your letter maintains a suitable tone for writing to a friend, balancing professionalism with warmth.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,