IELTS Writing Correction Service
Writing Samples
Band 8

In order to change their appearance people often turn to plastic surgery. What are the advantages and disadvantages of such an approach ?

#change #appearance #people #plastic #surgery #approach
✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?
Nowadays, turning to
plastic
Use synonyms
 surgery has become increasingly popular. For many
people
Use synonyms
, especially
for
Change preposition
apply
show examples
young adults, the chance to change their
appearance
Use synonyms
 is really an attractive one.
However
Linking Words
, there are both pros and cons to
this
Linking Words
. In
this
Linking Words
 essay, I will discuss some of the benefits of
plastic
Use synonyms
 surgery and what kind of risks are behind it. Let's begin by looking at the advantages of changing your
appearance
Use synonyms
 by a surgical method. One of the main positives is that it improves your self-esteem and enhances the prospects of private
life
Use synonyms
. What I mean by
this
Linking Words
 is that you have the chance to meet
people
Use synonyms
 with the
appearance
Use synonyms
 that completely meets your needs.
This
Linking Words
 can make you feel more confident.
Secondly
Linking Words
, let's be honest, hair implants and breast enlargement can lead to a better quality of
life
Use synonyms
. Take famous actors and actresses
for example
Linking Words
. Many
people
Use synonyms
 from the entertainment industry change their look all the time. Their attractiveness is mostly provided by
plastic
Use synonyms
 surgeons and they begin to love themselves even more, afterwards.
In addition
Linking Words
, you can gain better relationships and be promoted if your job is related to fashion and displays your body. Turning to the other side of the argument the possibility of getting damaged during an operation is a major problem. Many
people
Use synonyms
 who consider undergoing
plastic
Use synonyms
 surgery find that the possible destruction is astronomical. The possibility to live the rest of the
life
Use synonyms
 with an injury on your body or even face terrifies everyone. The
second
Linking Words
 problem is that the prices for it are not really that low. Breast augmentation,
for instance
Linking Words
, is around $4500 and hair implants cost around $3500. These prices are not affordable for everyone. All things considered, making up your mind about changing your
appearance
Use synonyms
 is never easy. You need to weigh up the pros of better
life
Use synonyms
 conditions, job promotions and so on and the cons of the possibility of getting damaged, the prices and possible public shaming.
Submitted by Esther on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

What to do next:
Look at other essays: