Nowadays people are affected by social media and internet. Is it a good or bad trend in your opinion? Explain it by giving your own examples.
Nowadays,
people
are tend
to interact with modern technology because of its convenience and entertainment Change the verb form
tend
although
it benefits human's needs however
it's still give
a huge Change the verb form
it still gives
impacts
on the users . In my opinion,social Correct the article-noun agreement
impact
media
and internet
contribute both good and bad side to everybody.
As we know,as the technology is developing fast,social Add an article
the internet
media
and internet
were borned
and we can't deny that we can live without Correct your spelling
born
internet
because there are
a huge vast of essential information for Change the verb form
is
eveyone
to access to study or research.Correct your spelling
everyone
Moreover
,for
example
they can have entertainment Add a comma
,example
such
as movie drammas
,music,online games in their free time.Correct your spelling
dramas
drama
However
,too much on
depending on the Change preposition
apply
internet
could lead to addicted which online game addicted has become a big problems
for our children.Correct the article-noun agreement
problem
Also
,online shopping can be fraud so it is untrustworthy for some people
to do online
transaction and seem to be annoying for everyone Add an article
the online
an online
wish
to have online Change the verb form
wishes
bussinesses
.
On the other side,social Correct your spelling
businesses
media
is highly useful in term of communicating in a convenient way.Plus,you can find more friends through social media
or do bussinesses
Correct your spelling
businesses
such
as clothes selling.Hence
,people
also
can entertain by chatting with their friends or family whenever they are not convenient to meet.For examples,there are some famous social media
apps like Instagram,Facebook and Whatsaap,... eventhough
it is interesting to have a free connection between Correct your spelling
even though
people
and people
, there a lot
fake accounts created to cheat Add the preposition
oflot
guilible
Correct your spelling
gullible
people
or influenced bad behaviour to children that's why we must have a right conscious to indicate what is true or false .
In conclusion,social media
and internet
may have benefited people
like modernity and convience
Correct your spelling
convenience
however
it is good that if you have good awareness to forseen
those unwanted things like fraud or bad contents Correct your spelling
foreseen
thus
you can have a safely
access to the Change the adverb
safe
internet
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