In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

The supplied graph illustrates the number of tourists visiting a Caribbean island from 2010 to 2017. At

first

glance, it is clear that all indicators are growing gradually, despite minor fluctuations. Now turning to the details, visitors who have stayed on cruise ships are slightly less than those who chose to spend their vacation on the island. The number of cruise tourists was constantly increasing, except in 2012. We can see that

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the total number has always been greater than

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. It peaked in the entire chart in 2017, gaining 3.5 million visitors. As is presented in the graph, the

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of people who stayed on

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often remained unchanged. In the period from 2010 to 2011 and 2013 to 2015, it has maintained stability. And in 2016

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option gave way to visitors staying on cruise ships. In 2017 it reached its previous indicator

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but still remained less, by gaining approximately 1.5 million

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

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Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

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