By 2030 many people think the world will have changed disastrously. Do you agree or disagree?

According to many environmentalists, the
rate
at which we, the
people
, are exploiting the mother nature, the
world
will change disastrously by the year 2030. I completely agree with the thoughts of
such
people
because of
pollution
and environmental degradation, which are caused by human activities. To meet the demands of the growing
world
population,
people
are rapidly depleting natural
resources
. These natural
resources
are generally non-renewable and take millions of years to produce. Natural
resources
such
as fossil fuels that have a high amount of carbon in it are the primary source of energy production. The utilisation of
such
resources
causes
pollution
, which in turn plays an important role in a temperature increase in the
world
, i.e., global warming.
This
phenomenon has been in the buzz for the
last
two decades. Increased global temperature has caused the polar caps to melt, causing increased sea level. Recent studies have shown that major coastal cities will go extinct in near future,
hence
changing the
world
geography completely. To afford the growing numbers of
people
in the
world
, we are cutting down the forests and
thus
, we are forcing many creatures and plants to extinct from the
world
. Extinction of these forests makes it impossible for us to cope with increased
pollution
that we make for energy production.
This
also
heavily impacts the climate of the
world
and creates major rifts in nature. Take, the tsunami for an example, it is caused by the earthquakes in oceans, which in turn caused by the movement of the tectonic plates. Disasters like these troubles many regions of the
world
.
Such
a phenomenon can be avoided by maintaining the balance between us and the mother nature. In conclusion, I would like to support the irrefutable notion of the
people
that earth would be completely changed ,if not early, by the year 2030. Humans are now understanding the threat and are trying to find new alternative and innovative ideas to avoid using non-renewable natural
resources
. But if the
rate
of
pollution
, with an increased
rate
of the
world
population, as well as the
rate
of environmental degradation is not slowed, we would be definitely looking at the
world
disaster.
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