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Band 7.5

Write at least 150 words. You have seen a job advertised in the newspaper. You want to apply for the job. Write a letter to the manager of the company. In your letter • provide information about yourself • give details of your previous work experience • Say why the company should consider you for the job You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir,

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
this
 letter to express my interest in the job advertised in the 'Daily Mirror' dated 15th June 2024, inviting applications for the post of sales manager in your esteemed company. I give below my particulars for your perusal and consideration.
Firstly
, I am currently working as a supervisor at Abc
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. I have been working over the
last
 two years.
Additionally
, I am good at communicating and sharing information with people
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 understanding of the business environment. Since, these days it is very difficult to find hardworking and dedicated employees, I assure you that my knowledge and experience can be a great asset to your company since the job description matches my skills and interests.
Hence
, I think I can be a perfect candidate for
this
 position. I look forward to your positive response. Thank you for your time and consideration. Please do not hesitate to contact me if you need any assistance. Yours sincerely, Harpreet Singh
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task achievement
Consider providing more specific details about your previous work experience, such as achievements or specific responsibilities. This would strengthen your application and demonstrate your suitability for the role more effectively.
coherence cohesion
Make sure each paragraph has a clear focus and structure. This will help improve the overall flow and make your letter easier to read.
coherence cohesion
You have a clear and polite greeting and closing, which are important aspects of formal correspondence.
task achievement
Your writing tone is appropriate for a job application, maintaining a professional and respectful demeanor throughout the letter.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • I am writing to express my interest in the [Position] advertised in [Newspaper].
  • I have [number] years of experience in [Your Field/Industry].
  • In my previous role at [Previous Company], I was responsible for [Key Responsibilities].
  • I successfully [Achievement or Project], which resulted in [Result/Impact].
  • I am particularly attracted to [Company Name] because of [Reason].
  • I believe my skills in [Key Skill] and [Another Skill] align well with the requirements of the job.
  • My ability to [Relevant Skill or Experience] would make a valuable addition to your team.
  • I am eager to contribute to [Company Name]’s success by [How You Can Contribute].
  • Thank you for considering my application. I look forward to the possibility of discussing my application further.
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