When new towns are planned, it is important to build more public parks or sports facilities than shopping centers for people to spend their free time. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

When planning a new town, the authorities should take various perspectives into consideration and need to prioritize the construction of various
facilities
. I think, to encourage an active lifestyle, it is more essential to invest in public
parks
and equipment rather than shopping
centres
. Admittedly, providing sports
facilities
in the
parks
is an effective way to improve city dwellers' health and
thus
reduce the government's budget for medical expense in the long term. As we can see, these
parks
are a good place for exercise, particularly for people who are not interested in competitive athletics.
For example
, in early mornings, we will observe many citizens practice jogging, dancing or practising Tai Chi in the public places due to having the convenient
facilities
as well as high greenery, so as to create a comfortable environment for city inhabitants.
Therefore
, we can have close contact with nature and make ourselves refreshed.
Additionally
, the main function of shopping
centres
is for people to buy various goods, but in today's world, when online shopping is becoming increasingly prevalent, the role of physical stores seem to be weakened.
For instance
, at the weekends, if we are tired after backbreaking periods of work, we can pick some products in e-shopping
instead
of going shopping because of the convenience and speed it offers. The large shopping
centres
also
include some leisure equipment
such
as a cafe, cinema,
however
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these are not as important as
parks
and sports
centres
. In conclusion, I believe that more emphasis should be placed on building a public playground and sports
facilities
for citizens.
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