You have read an article in a national newspaper which claims that town centers in your country all look very similar to each other. You don’t fully agree with this opinion. Write a letter to the editor of the newspaper. In your letter: Say which points in the article you agree with Explain ways in which your town center is different from most other town cities Offer to give a guided tour of your town to the writer of the article

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am a frequent reader of your weekly paper, the Route.

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letter to draw your attention to some inaccurate information in a recent article that was published about the town

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in Iran. Admittedly, I believe

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amount of information that

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mentioned in

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article was correct. It clearly illustrates some crucial problems

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as heavy traffic congestion and polluted air in the city

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, Since each town has its own features that separate it from the others, I firmly disagree with the point that the majority of town

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in my country look the same.

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, Shiraz is well-known for its literature and poetry and it has a book statue in the

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Kerman as the main region of exporting fruits and an array of nuts, like pomegranate and pistachio, is distinguished with its big stores and shops in the heart of the city. I would like to invite you to visit my hometown, Ardabil. I can provide a guided tour for you to show you various parts of my city and all the common activities and features of my hometown. Please do not hesitate to contact me should you have any

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inquiries. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully Ibrahim Tatli

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Grammar

Ensure subject-verb agreement. For example, 'substantial amount' should be 'a substantial amount'.

Content

Provide a bit more detail about unique features or landmarks in Ardabil to strengthen your argument.

Grammar

There are some minor issues with conjunctions; review your use of 'Nevertheless' and 'Since' for clarity.

Tone

The letter has a polite and professional tone, which is appropriate for correspondence with a newspaper editor.

Engagement

You effectively included your invitation for a guided tour, which adds a personal touch and demonstrates your enthusiasm.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

220 words

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