Some people believe that too many resources and attention are devoted to the protection of wild animals and birds. To what extend do you agree or disagree

It is believed that several

resources

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and

attention

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are needed to protect and save birds and

animals

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. In my point of view,

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somewhat agree and

i

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believe that

animals

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and birds need protection by giving them

attention

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.

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,

humans

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also

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need some

attention

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.

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of all,

animals

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are the major and

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important source for the entire world. One of the main reasons can be that

humans

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granted many benefits from all kinds of

animals

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in various works.

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means that without

animals

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,

humans

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cannot survive. Another reason can be that

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provide many useful gains for food, trade, and

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other livings.

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,

people

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use

animals

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' skins to make clothes, bags, shoes and many inventions.

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,

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people

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can use

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in

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security and

defense

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.

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, it is

also

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possible to make the opposing case that

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human beings have the credit to

develope

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develop

and improve the globe.

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means that

attension

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attention

and

resources

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are devoted to the safety of

people

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. The

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point is that there is a

considreable

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considerable

increase in the number of poor inhabitants and

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of diseases in some countries.

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is because

that

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there is a huge lack

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the

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resources

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and in

government's

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responsibilities. A

particulary

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particularly

particular

good example here is that many

researches

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types of research

pieces of research

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, statistics, and investigations showed some countries suffered from weak livings and have less food,

accomodations

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accommodations

accommodation

, and other

resources

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. To sum up, while some

people

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believed that

attention

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and

resources

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are needed to protect wild

animals

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and birds,

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believe that

humans

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too are important.