Some people believe that too many resources and attention are devoted to the protection of wild animals and birds. To what extend do you agree or disagree

It is believed that several
resources
and
attention
are needed to protect and save birds and
animals
. In my point of view,
i
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somewhat agree and
i
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believe that
animals
and birds need protection by giving them
attention
.
However
,
humans
also
need some
attention
.
First
of all,
animals
are the major and
the
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important source for the entire world. One of the main reasons can be that
humans
granted many benefits from all kinds of
animals
in various works.
This
means that without
animals
,
humans
cannot survive. Another reason can be that
animals
provide many useful gains for food, trade, and
for
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other livings.
For instance
,
people
use
animals
' skins to make clothes, bags, shoes and many inventions.
In addition
,
the
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people
can use
animals
in
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security and
defense
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.
Secondly
, it is
also
possible to make the opposing case that
also
human beings have the credit to
develope
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develop
and improve the globe.
This
means that
attension
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attention
and
resources
are devoted to the safety of
people
. The
second
point is that there is a
considreable
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considerable
increase in the number of poor inhabitants and
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of diseases in some countries.
This
is because
that
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there is a huge lack
in
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the
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resources
and in
government's
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the government's
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responsibilities. A
particulary
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particularly
particular
good example here is that many
researches
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pieces of research
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, statistics, and investigations showed some countries suffered from weak livings and have less food,
accomodations
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accommodations
accommodation
, and other
resources
. To sum up, while some
people
believed that
attention
and
resources
are needed to protect wild
animals
and birds,
i
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believe that
humans
too are important.
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