Today more people are travelling than ever before. Why is this the case? What are the benefits of travelling for the traveller ?

As compared to
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scenario,
majority
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of
people
these days are going out on trips frequently than before and
this
change of preference for travelling is been published in many research papers submitted by New York Times in association with Harvard Business School. There are few factors which
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led to many
people
opting to travel than
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indoors and the key main factors for
this
change is in the overall experience of travelling which has become more surreal and comfortable, where you can reach remotest of destination with multiple modes of transportation reducing travel time.
Also
, another reason being
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in disposable income of
people
especially among
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millennials
since they have
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outlook towards life and want to explore new places and undertake adventure compared to their older generation who weren’t much
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. As per
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done by RBI and IMF, more than 40% of income earned by these young task force
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on vacations and exploring new avenues because of which there is
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in
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industry
since
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last
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2 years. There’s
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positive experience that travelling brings out in the traveller.
Firstly
, it helps individuals learn about
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the diverse
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background that co-exits in our society and
this
perspective building of diversity helps them in their careers ahead when they join multi-national companies.
Secondly
, travelling
also
helps to reduce stress by rejuvenating
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, body and soul by providing an individual break from their day-to-day routine life. Since, travelling is helping
people
connect to their inner self and rejoice their time to relax
themselves
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from mundane chores,
hence
more and more
people
are now opting for travelling than previously.
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