More children in developed countries are becoming overweight. This is a serious problem for wealthy countries. Discuss some causes and effects of this problem. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
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influences the trending has caused awful impacts on children's eating habits.Linking Words
Therefore
,teenagers are moving towardly to the disease called "obese".The purpose of Linking Words
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discuss.
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generation has been living a modern and convenient life.Everything was simplified because there are more ideas and technology projects are introduced to our life.Linking Words
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habits are one the factor,as fast Use synonyms
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restaurant has been developing in a prominent way ,everyone was impressed by it because of its fast serving yet tasty.The fact is inside these type of dishes they really have zero on nutrition and contain a lot of malnutrition like sugars,fats Use synonyms
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which ruins your body's development.Linking Words
In addition
, the absence of regular exercise is Linking Words
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food
and sodas teenagers are expected to have coronary heart disease in future.
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instead
of convincing kids to reduce the amount of junks' usage,sellers are encouraged them to purchase by attracting them with some fancy advertisement.To illustrate,we can see an advertisement are being introduced almost everywhere Linking Words
such
as television and the internet or social media.With the growth of ,consumers these factories become gaining in wealth and willing to represent another product that indeed captures those targets like young people.Linking Words
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dreadful cycle has implemented the young generation's a new habit of eating Linking Words
thus
people become overweight and lost in their confidence.
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has been one of the biggest factors that contribute to the main reasons for children who are obese.Use synonyms
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cause has altered our habit of eating and pull down the quality of lifestyle for everybody.Linking Words
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