The rising levels of congestion and air pollution found in most of the world cities can be attributed directly to the rapidly increasing number of private cars in use. In order to reverse this decline in quality of life in cities, attempts must be made to encourage people to use their cars less and public transport more. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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In
this
day and age, more and more contemporary attention has been placed on whether or not car
ownership should be discouraged and the government should inspire people to utilize public transport much more. I myself believe that this
is a good option to improve the air quality and relieve traffic
congestion in many cities; however
, at the same time
there is much that can be done to contribute to better living conditions in big cities.
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First
, it is clear that calling upon car
users to take advantages of public
transportation system would lead to a reduction Correct article usage
the public
traffic
jams and Change preposition
in traffic
cleaner
environment. As a matter of fact, when alternative means of transport are available, cheaper and convenient enough, commutersCorrect article usage
a cleaner
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, as a result,
as a result
may prefer using it, which could bring about less
cars on the road and Change the quantifier
fewer
also
less car
exhaust gases. Singapore, for instance
, is one of the cleanest countries in the world with least
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the least
traffic
thanks to its excellent public transportation system. However
, this
measure alone is unlikely to have a major impact on the quality of life
Another feasible approach is that government
should enact strict laws on cars import activities and Add an article
the government
car
usage. To be more specific, when taxing cars at the point of purchase or annually through tax
would make them more expensive, causing a shrink in the number of buyers. Add an article
the tax
In addition
to that, several kinds of car
use, such
as for short journeys, within packed cities can be discouraged through road pricing schemes and high parking ticket price. By doing these, traffic
congestion could be relived and air pollutants including car
emissions also
diminish substantially.
In conclusion, with all the reasons mentioned above, I partly lean on the idea of stimulate
residents to commute by public transport to reduce Change the form of the verb
stimulating
car
use because there are several drastic ways to better both traffic
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