The first car appeared on British roads in 1888. By the year 2020 there may be as many as 40 million vehicles on British roads. Alternative forms of transport should be encouraged and international laws introduced to control car ownership and use. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In modern society, transportation becomes
one
of the most essential needs.
Therefore
, the
number
of people who own a private car has been increasing dramatically.
However
, there are various problems that happened by
this
phenomenon,
such
as traffic congestion, air pollution, as well as overconsuming of fossil fuel.
Thus
, some people support that other forms of transporting should be encouraged, and some laws should be published globally to limit car ownership. I completely agree with
this
opinion and I will illustrate my view in the essay. On the
one
hand, there is plenty of other means to commute.
Firstly
, public transport is
one
of the alternative measures that can be used to substitute private vehicles.
For instance
, in China, most public transport facilities
such
as metro, high-speed railway, and taxi which have been taken place to an electric
one
. In another word, choosing mass transit can both diminish the carbon dioxide emission by changing the type of
energy
being used and release the traffic congestion by cutting down the
number
of cars on the road.
Furthermore
, the sharing bicycle is a good replacing measure of transportation in a short distance too. Because the bicycle does not consume any fossil
energy
, it is contributive to the declining greenhouse effect. Meanwhile, the bicycle is
also
good for our health.
On the other hand
, there are various policies that the United Nation can make to limit the purchases of vehicles in each country for combating climate change. A limitation of the
number
of petrol cars can contribute to reducing carbon footprints in the cities. The Chinese government,
for example
, has been limiting the
number
of licence plates for citizens, which reduces a lot of gasoline automobiles on road. By doing
this
, more people are now choosing renewable
energy
vehicles.
Consequently
, regulations like the mentioned above
also
make a great contribution to conserving
energy
as well as saving the planet. In conclusion, the high demand for cars leads to poor living surroundings. To reduce pollution, more environmentally friendly commuting methods should
be opted
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, and rigid regulations must be introduced all around the world.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • reliance on
  • regulate
  • traffic congestion
  • pollution
  • public health
  • sustainable development
  • alternative forms of transport
  • car ownership
  • balancing benefits and drawbacks
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