The first car appeared on British roads in 1888. By the year 2020 there may be as many as 40 million vehicles on British roads. Alternative forms of transport should be encouraged and international laws introduced to control car ownership and use. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In modern society, transportation becomes

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of the most essential needs.

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, the

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of people who own a private car has been increasing dramatically.

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, there are various problems that happened by

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as traffic congestion, air pollution, as well as overconsuming of fossil fuel.

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, some people support that other forms of transporting should be encouraged, and some laws should be published globally to limit car ownership. I completely agree with

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opinion and I will illustrate my view in the essay. On the

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hand, there is plenty of other means to commute.

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, public transport is

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of the alternative measures that can be used to substitute private vehicles.

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, in China, most public transport facilities

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as metro, high-speed railway, and taxi which have been taken place to an electric

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. In another word, choosing mass transit can both diminish the carbon dioxide emission by changing the type of

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being used and release the traffic congestion by cutting down the

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of cars on the road.

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, the sharing bicycle is a good replacing measure of transportation in a short distance too. Because the bicycle does not consume any fossil

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, it is contributive to the declining greenhouse effect. Meanwhile, the bicycle is

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good for our health.

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, there are various policies that the United Nation can make to limit the purchases of vehicles in each country for combating climate change. A limitation of the

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of petrol cars can contribute to reducing carbon footprints in the cities. The Chinese government,

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, has been limiting the

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of licence plates for citizens, which reduces a lot of gasoline automobiles on road. By doing

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, more people are now choosing renewable

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vehicles.

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, regulations like the mentioned above

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make a great contribution to conserving

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as well as saving the planet. In conclusion, the high demand for cars leads to poor living surroundings. To reduce pollution, more environmentally friendly commuting methods should

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, and rigid regulations must be introduced all around the world.