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Multicultural societies, in which there is a mixture of different ethnic peoples, bring more benefits than drawbacks to a country. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Mix cultural societies have enormous benefits as compare to a few disadvantages. I completely agree with
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 notion because
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nations
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 with multicultural
people
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 grow socially as well as economically because of
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 of strengths.
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, it helps in social development.
People
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 from different
cultures
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 have a sense of learning and curiosity for others culture. They initiate and
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express
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 each other to learn
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cultures
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.
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 way they start conversations and exchange
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. The communication among them become good gradually.
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further
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 result
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 regular sharing of notions and
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.
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, a recent survey state that in the desire of learning each
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cultures
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people
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 become friends.
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, gradually relationships become strong and bonds are
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 building which helps in
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 growth of
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.
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,
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 groom economically because
people
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 from different culture have their own unique
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 to boost the economy and
business
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 techniques.
People
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 from different culture have unique talents. They have different
stratergies
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strategies
 to run their
business
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. If they exchange
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 and guide each other,
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the nation
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 becomes economically strong.
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, a recent article by an
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 newspaper state that countries like Canada which has
population
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a population
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 from different
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is
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 growing rapidly because they are learning
business
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 skills from each other.
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, multicultural countries are beneficial to grow economically. In conclusion, multicultural societies are good for
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economical as well as social welfare. These
nations
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 are growing, they are becoming close to each other by interactions with
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 of learning each
others
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other's
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cultures
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 and exchanging
business
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ideas
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.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • multiculturalism
  • cultural diversity
  • economic prosperity
  • social cohesion
  • integration
  • cultural assimilation
  • ethnic diversity
  • cultural exchange
  • global influence
  • inclusive governance
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