Multicultural societies, in which there is a mixture of different ethnic peoples, bring more benefits than drawbacks to a country. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Mix cultural societies have enormous benefits as compare to a few disadvantages. I completely agree with
this
notion because
such
nations
with multicultural
people
grow socially as well as economically because of
sharing
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of strengths.
Firstly
, it helps in social development.
People
from different
cultures
have a sense of learning and curiosity for others culture. They initiate and
exprees
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express
their interest
to
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each other to learn
their
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about their
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cultures
.
This
way they start conversations and exchange
ideas
. The communication among them become good gradually.
This
further
result
into
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regular sharing of notions and
ideas
.
For instance
, a recent survey state that in the desire of learning each
others
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cultures
people
become friends.
Hence
, gradually relationships become strong and bonds are
also
building which helps in
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growth of
nations
.
Secondly
,
nations
groom economically because
people
from different culture have their own unique
ideas
to boost the economy and
business
techniques.
People
from different culture have unique talents. They have different
stratergies
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strategies
to run their
business
. If they exchange
ideas
and guide each other,
nation
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becomes economically strong.
For instance
, a recent article by an
english
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newspaper state that countries like Canada which has
population
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a population
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from different
nations
is
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growing rapidly because they are learning
business
skills from each other.
Therefore
, multicultural countries are beneficial to grow economically. In conclusion, multicultural societies are good for
the
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economical as well as social welfare. These
nations
are growing, they are becoming close to each other by interactions with
sense
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a sense
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of learning each
others
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other's
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cultures
and exchanging
business
ideas
.
Submitted by Priya on

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • multiculturalism
  • cultural diversity
  • economic prosperity
  • social cohesion
  • integration
  • cultural assimilation
  • ethnic diversity
  • cultural exchange
  • global influence
  • inclusive governance
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