Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of the society. Others, however, believe that the school is the best place to learn this. Discuss both views and give own opinion.

There is no doubt that raising
is a difficult process. It is thought that
is responsible for bringing up positively influencing generations.
, I believe that
is the
' responsibility. In
essay, I will explain both sides and clarify my support for the letter. on the one hand,
is thought to be a convenient environment where kids can be learnt how to be socially effective.
is because the whole social experiment that
face at
is significant. To illustrate, when students go to
they are not only learning scientific materials but
meeting their peers and teachers.
, they would be forced to contact their colleagues and sometimes experience bullying which affects their personality.
, pupils would learn manners and ethics from their teachers who are careful to guide their students in the right way. On other hand, I argue that
a mission is mostly
' responsibility.
is because they are responsible for their
since birth.
In other words
start to raise their kids a long time before enrolling in schools because the personality of human beings starts to appear at the age of 2 years.
, proper guidance at an early age results in well-brought-up individuals who are self-assured and would participate positively in society.
For instance
, research published in Al-Ahram weekly stated that about 40% of criminals have faced an assaulted childhood. To conclude, I wholeheartedly believe that
should raise their
as effective citizens rather than leaving
task for schools.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation


To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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