Some people think that wild animals should not be kept in zoos. Others believe that there are some good reasons for having zoos. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Zoos are the places where wild
animals
are kept in a closed space as amusement for humans. The perspective that animals
should be kept in a zoo
or not is a heated debatable topic for many years. In my opinion , animals
should be set free and live in their own comfort. Now we will be discussing a few points both in favour and against this
topic.
In
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On
one
hand, Correct article usage
the one
life
of wild creatures should not be disturbed and they should have freedom like humans to live in their own comfort and habitats. Because of human interference being done with Add an article
the life
a life
the
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wild
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wildlife
life
, many animals
have become extinct and endangered. Some of the animals
could not adapt to the Zoo
environment and die because of hostile conditions. For instance
, some animals
like monkeys, gorillas are continuously being tortured by their masters and also
visitors. So this
makes them very uncomfortable and they could not survive. So , animals
should not be caged and not made an element just for sake of entertainment and fun.
On the other hand
, sometimes it has been found that animals
got a new life
after coming to Zoo
. Zoo
plays an important part in saving endangered species. In past, It has been reported by the forest authorities that they found some creatures in a vulnerable state and hence
they have been brought and taken care of by Zoo
. In cases like this
, Zoo
life
can be a blessing as well.In addition
to this
, Zoos are one of the tourist attractions and plays a crucial part in countries revenue.
To conclude, According to me
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my
Animals
should not be caged and kept in Zoos. They also
have full freedom to live their life
according to their choices and without being monitored all the time. They should not be a means to earn money.Submitted by Ranjith
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite