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Many people decide on a career path early in their lives and keep to it. This, they argue, leads to a more satisfying working life. To what extent do you agree with this view? What other things can people do in order to have a satisfying working life?

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It is believed that having a defined career path from an early age would contribute to achieving better satisfying working
life
. While I completely agree with
this
 statement, there are various ways in which people could obtain
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 level of job satisfaction. One of the significant reasons
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 choosing a certain profession in early
life
 is that it helps motivate young adults to keep a sharp focus and work hard toward their dream, and
therefore
 they feel more satisfied when they made
this
 dream becomes true.
For instance
, when children dream of becoming a doctor in the future, they realize that the only way to do
this
 is by studying hard, and
this
 can be rewarding in the long run because they will remember all the struggles they encounter; making them happier doing their job. There are various methods to reach higher levels of happiness in career
life
. Some employees enjoy working in
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 atmosphere where they can thrive,
recieve
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tremendous support from their boss and form strong bonds with their colleagues. Others consider having a high income as
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 to gain
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 satisfying working
life
 because it enables them to have a better lifestyle and healthcare.
Although
 these ways can create a sense of enjoyment in what they are working, deciding on
profession
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 as a child would help to effectively
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 their satisfaction in the long term as a professional worker. To sum up, it might seem sensible to accept that opting
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 particular profession early would generate a great sense of satisfaction during working
life
 despite the alternative methods of achieving it.
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