Ordinary people try to copy famous people either reading magazines or watching TV. What are the reasons of doing this. Do you think is it good idea to copy famous people.

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Famous celebrities are coming up with the latest trend every now and

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. The general public following these

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via various platforms

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as print

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or digital

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begin to mimic them in various ways. I do not support

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practice and would not encourage it. In

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essay, I will discuss some of the reasons to justify my stand.

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with, the public thinks very highly of these famous

people

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. So, they feel obligatory to emulate them in order to show their commitment towards them.

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people

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are made to think that they are outdated if they are not following the latest trend.

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, a person wearing a simple outfit is looked down on by those who have designer clothes as seen on

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leads them to adopt the lifestyle of their favourite actors or players to be socially accepted in society.

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, famous

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are rich and their lifestyle includes some of the activities which may not go down well with some who belong to a middle-income class. They wear branded clothing and have the latest cars which are expensive.

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, Brad Pitt endorsing a swiss watch may worth thousands of dollars which is not affordable to purchase.

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people

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who try to follow their way of living can end up burning a hole in their pocket.

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, What was obsolete earlier can be

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latest trend nowadays.

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, it seems pointless to emulate them as they come up with a new fashion on regular basis. In conclusion, the following renowned faces of

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are not a good choice. After thorough analysis,

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can be concluded that

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practice can not only be difficult to incorporate but

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, very costly.

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, it is pointless to live their way of living.

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A cafe near your home puts some chairs and tables on the pavement for customers. This creates a problem for you. Write a letter to the cafe manager to complain about this matter. In your letter describe the problem; explain how it affects you; say what you will do if this matter is not resolved.