Using a computer everyday can have more negative than positive effect on young children To what extent do you agree and disagree with this opinion ?
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for today's generation, without Correct your spelling
necessity
necessary
use
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the use
computers
daily could cause dangerous
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kids
rather than providing benefit. I agree with this
point to some extent, as using computers
have both pros and cons, follwing
is explained in detail.
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following
Firstly
, in this
modern era of technology daily use
of computer
is almost unavoidable because Add an article
a computer
the computer
kids
are getting homeworks
, school assignments and Correct your spelling
homework
othe
academic activities that can be completed on systems only. Correct your spelling
other
Moreover
in the pandemic situation due to COVID-19 and lockdown students are getting online distance learning and that is
not possible without computer
use
. Secondly
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early
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to
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kids
that will surely help them to acheive
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achieve
this
competetive
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competitive
For instance
, it is not difficult for children now even in developing countries like Pakistan to communicate effectively by email, that
was not possible without Correct pronoun usage
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use
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the use
computers
.
On the other hand
, there are so many disadvantages of computer
use
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age like Add an article
an early
kids
can reach every site available on internet
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the internet
that is
not appropriate for them, that can lead to so many social promlems
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problems
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the wide
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computers
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. Further more
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Furthermore
computers
and other gudgets
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specially
for video games can have many injurious health Replace the word
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, including Correct your spelling
effects
eye sight
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For example
, one research published in world magzine
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magazine
,
reported that more than 70% of children who are using Remove the comma
apply
computers
more than 6 hours per day are suffering from spine problems.
To conclude this
, in my opinion
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use
of Correct article usage
the use
computers
by young children. There must be some fixed time allocated for screen
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the screen
a screen
then
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kids
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