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In some countries, most people prefer to rent a house rather than buying one. Describe the advantages and disadvantages of renting.

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In a few nations, a large number of people believe renting a
house
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 is a better option than purchasing one. The primary disadvantage of buying a
house
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 is they cannot make any major changes in the
house
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 and the main advantage of
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 is that they can invest the same
money
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 in a
business
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 that can generate enough income to pay the rent and bills and still save some
money
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 for the future. The fundamental drawback of renting a
house
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 that the tenant cannot renovate the
house
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 according to their comfort level.
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 is to say that most landlords would not allow people who are renting their
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 to make any big changes and tenants have to make a sacrifice because they have signed the agreement paper.
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, in most of the agreement ,paper it is written that a tenant cannot change the structure of the
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 or do any kind of renovation that affect the total
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.
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, they are able to save the
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 that they would have invested if they bought their own
house
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. The primary benefit of
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 is that they can put the
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, in any
business
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, they have saved by just not purchasing an apartment.
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 is because just by renting a
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 they have saved the
money
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 they would be needed to buy a
house
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, now they can invest it in any
business
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 and after the
business
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 is properly set up it generates enough income to pay rent, bills and even they can buy a
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 latter.
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, people who are more inclined towards entrepreneurship prefer to invest their savings in a
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 than buying a
house
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 because they know that after a few years that
business
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 would be able to purchase them a
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. I believe it is a more practical approach because one can wait for owning a
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. In many states, it is believed that renting a
house
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 is a more appropriate option than purchasing one. A major change that cannot be made is the biggest disadvantage of renting a
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 but the amount that can be invested in any
business
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 that increases the income is the primary benefit.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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