In some areas of the US, a 'curfew' is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult. What is your opinion about this?

With the growing age of

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, it becomes extremely important for parents to monitor their activities and in many countries, rules have been laid down which

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it mandatory for

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to either stay home or be accompanied by adults in order to go out at a certain time of the day

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considering the advantages of imposing regulations on teens going out at

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common concern regarding

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there are umpteen antisocial elements elevating the risk of criminal activities which they might consider a part of having fun.

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concludes that 70%of the crimes are conducted after the sun goes down.

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, Teenagers are innocent and unaware of the disastrous incidents that might happen.

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, adolescents may get habitual to the nightlife, which is the soul of countries like the US and

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their time rather than spending it on self-development activities.

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it is good to go to parties once in a

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, getting addicted could ruin the grades and hinder the personal growth of young

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that teens

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a highly active social life are observed to have depreciating grades.

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, teenagers must be regulated and guided in the correct direction. In conclusion, It is highly thoughtful of the US government to enforce regulations on the nightlife of youth and

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assisting adults to control their growing

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. In my perspective, the actions of adolescents require monitoring and imposing a

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curfew could be an initiative to facilitate their safety and security.