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Compare the advantages and disadvantages of three of the following ways of learning a foreign language. State which you consider to be the most effective. - studying on your own - taking lessons with a private tutor - taking lessons as part of a class - taking lessons online - going to live in a country where the language is spoken

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Nowaday's a lot of ways you can learn a foreign
language
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. I consider to be the most efficient is taking lessons in a classroom setting and living in the place or
country
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 where they spoke the
language
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,
however
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, learning on your own is fine but it will not give you proper learning like correct pronunciation and proper usage of the words.
To begin
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 with, learning a new thing in your life is not easy especially when you learn it when you already an adult.
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, I came from a small
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 and trying to live in Denmark, for me to communicate well with other people I need to learn their
language
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 which I supposed the most difficult
language
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 in the world. I find it easy when I attend classes with other students that I could talk with the dialect and correct me if I'm wrong.
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, it much easier if you will live in the
country
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 itself, you will hear it regularly in casual conversation and later on you will know the word and what it means.
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, these two ways are effective if you want to learn a foreign
language
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.
On the other hand
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, personal effort is best to learn another thing, but in term of learning the
language
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 is not really effective.
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, a student who relies on books and reading articles can learn words, but the disadvantage of these is when he will talk to a real speaker, his pronunciation and proper usage of the words and putting it in a sentence is the most challenging part of learning. It is difficult to really understand and use the
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 because no one will correct you if you get wrong, so it is not efficient to use it
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 way. In conclusion, it is better to be in a classroom and interact with other students while learning other
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 and most importantly it is effective if you live in that
country
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 because you are surrounded by native speakers.

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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic

IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.

Answer structure for the type of essay

  • Introduction
  • Body paragraph 1 – advantages
  • Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
  • Conclusion

Examples to start your body paragraph:

  • The main advantage is...
  • The disadvantage of this...
  • The main benefit...
  • Despite these advantages...
  • One possible drawback...

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