Some modern artist receive huge sums of money for the things they create while others struggle to survive Governments should take steps to resolve this unfair situation To what extent do you agree or disagree

Some modern artist receive huge sums of money for the

things

they create while others struggle to survive Governments should take steps to resolve

this

unfair situation To what extent do you agree or disagree It is believed that nowadays, many scientific experts

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paid

a huge sums

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huge sums

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of money for creating

things

, meanwhile, others have difficulties getting by. Some state that

government

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ought to address measures to balance

this

unjustified circumstance. From my perspective, I strongly agree with the statement given.

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essay tends to elaborate thoroughly

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matter in the following paragraphs.

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to mention, some scientists may have high income for making peril

things

which can be a huge threat to other people or even to other countries

such

as

deadly

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biological weapon or nuclear bomb.

Therefore

,

government

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the government

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should have a strict policy to evaluate the quality and the benefit given by each

products

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created before they come into the market.

In addition

, taxes on those products would be appropriate so that the federal agency is able to take control of the price and to prevent

things

might cost unexpectedly higher than

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true value.

Secondly

, a lot of brilliant haven’t had an actual chance to prove themselves seriously .

Therefore

,

government

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the government

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should have more policies and create funds to encourage the growth and development in many scientific aspects, organize more competitions ( national and international) in order to not only to provide the income for many experts in

this

realm but

also

to give them the opportunities to contribute to the country’s wealth and prosperity. To conclude, science is an aspect which is really crucial to human daily life, without its product, people can hardly survive until

this

day.

However

, there is still an unfair situation happening between scientists these days which requires governmental solutions.