Some people think media should be allowed to publicize information on someone’s private life. Some others believe that media should be regulated in this regard. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answers and relevant examples.

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The
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competition
of journalism in today's time have made journalists
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constantly hunt for new and exciting
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to allure
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towards their
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channels or social pages. Publishing
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and articles on someone's private
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is a crucial matter and has to be dealt
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.
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, journalists must have
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keen understanding
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what to publish on their channels or newspapers. Private matters
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holiday trips, throwing huge events and buying new properties is not that awkward because these type of
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can encourage
people
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in progressing in their lives. As many
people
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tend to follow many celebrities lifestyle and try to reach
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up to
their levels.
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, sometimes publishing articles on private
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can help them gain fame and stardom in their respective fields.
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impact on their careers at certain times.
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, as previously mentioned journalists must have
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sense of publishing
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, many times they show inappropriate contents about the personal lives of
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. Nowadays some of the much personal matters are shown in media.
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,
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about female celebrities in regard to their pregnancy, when are they delivering babies, about their divorces are considered inappropriate. According to
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, telecasting
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type of
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can negatively impact
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society. To recapitulate,
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are
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the
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vital part
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everyone's
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as they help us remain cognizant
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the world around us.
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, there must be strict regulation in putting up content about anyone's private
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and permission must be
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before disclosing the content.
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, it is the duty of every individual to crosscheck any information prior to forwarding with
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sense of sensitivity and responsibility towards an individual.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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