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Nowadays, anyone can post information on the internet even if it is incorrect. As a result, most of the information we read is accurate. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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In the present time, everyone has the advantage of using the
internet
 to express
one
's knowledge. Some people believe that the online information given is mostly inaccurate ,
however
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 I do not completely advocate the same.
This
 essay will discuss both views with some relevant examples.
To begin
 with the positive aspect of
internet
 information. As we live in a modern world where everything is advanced, so for checking any detail we need the help of technology.
In other words
, if someone is planning to travel any particular place around the globe but he is struggling with the problems
such
 as location, modes of transport, cuisines, culture and accommodation of that place,
internet
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 is the only solution to
such
 kinds of problems.
In addition
, many educational institutes are providing online classes for their course, by surfing the net,
one
 is able to know thoroughly about the college, faculty, coursework and fee structure.
Nevertheless
, there are many fake websites that provide unreliable data for their products.
For example
, a survey shows the data given on the webpage of
one
 of the famous cosmetic company found to be inauthentic, to promote the sale of their things.
Moreover
, People nowadays using
internet
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 to become popular and posting details about them that are not correct. To conclude, despite the fake and inaccurate references made on the various sources of online modes,
one
 should check the authenticity of the data and the sites for surfing. We should be alert while surfing the net as it provides both fake as well as genuine contents.
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