the continued rise in the world's population is the greatest problem faced by humanity at the present time. What are the causes of this continued rise? Do you agree that it is the greatest problem faced by humanity?

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The increasing number of the human population is the biggest
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in
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century. Many
people
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believe that many reasons have driven
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occurrence as well as the problems that might follow it.
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, in
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essay, I would like to suggest the main driving force behind
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issue
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together with the plausible answer regarding
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matter.
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with, as it is forecasted a long time ago, the number of
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that live on earth could double in 2030, and
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place is predicted can not contain many
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in 2050.
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prediction has been announced in the
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2 decades, when the Asian countries,
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, Chinese
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, still believed in the lame tradition in which they see that many children can bring prosperity in the later time.
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, affects the behaviour of young
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in Asia to have many children when they are married.
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,
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trend is still continuing, even though the government has eradicated
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belief.
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, overpopulation, indeed, the biggest problem that we face right now. Why it can be like that? It is because of the problems that it brings to us, especially humanity matters. The
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problem is the lack of a decent place to live, as we have known,
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in Hong Kong, many
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live in a cage. How could
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happen? The answer is because they do not have enough space to build another housing residence for
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, even though the number of residents is increasing. Another problem is sanitation. As the population grow, the amount of clean water will not grow,
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it will decline until we suffer from drought and some of us may have a health
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because of bad microorganisms that attach to us or
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, I could say that we can not maintain our hygiene. For that reason, both those things are very crucial for us as a human, but if the earth is overloaded, those matters can not be fulfiled.
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, it threats our lives. In a nutshell, the old Asian tradition may be the main reason for
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occurrence and it causes a big threat to humanity by causing other problems,
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as lowering the sanitation's standard and lack of a decent place to live.
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, in my personal belief, I agree that overpopulation becomes a major
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for humanity at the present time.
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