the continued rise in the world's population is the greatest problem faced by humanity at the present time. What are the causes of this continued rise? Do you agree that it is the greatest problem faced by humanity?

The increasing number of the human population is the biggest

issue

in

this

century. Many

people

believe that many reasons have driven

this

occurrence as well as the problems that might follow it.

Therefore

, in

this

essay, I would like to suggest the main driving force behind

this

issue

together with the plausible answer regarding

this

matter.

To begin

with, as it is forecasted a long time ago, the number of

people

that live on earth could double in 2030, and

this

place is predicted can not contain many

people

in 2050.

This

prediction has been announced in the

last

2 decades, when the Asian countries,

for example

, Chinese

people

, still believed in the lame tradition in which they see that many children can bring prosperity in the later time.

This

,

however

, affects the behaviour of young

people

in Asia to have many children when they are married.

As a result

,

this

trend is still continuing, even though the government has eradicated

this

belief.

Moreover

, overpopulation, indeed, the biggest problem that we face right now. Why it can be like that? It is because of the problems that it brings to us, especially humanity matters. The

first

problem is the lack of a decent place to live, as we have known,

for instance

in Hong Kong, many

people

live in a cage. How could

this

happen? The answer is because they do not have enough space to build another housing residence for

people

, even though the number of residents is increasing. Another problem is sanitation. As the population grow, the amount of clean water will not grow,

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it will decline until we suffer from drought and some of us may have a health

issue

because of bad microorganisms that attach to us or

in other words

, I could say that we can not maintain our hygiene. For that reason, both those things are very crucial for us as a human, but if the earth is overloaded, those matters can not be fulfiled.

Thus

, it threats our lives. In a nutshell, the old Asian tradition may be the main reason for

this

occurrence and it causes a big threat to humanity by causing other problems,

such

as lowering the sanitation's standard and lack of a decent place to live.

Hence

, in my personal belief, I agree that overpopulation becomes a major

issue

for humanity at the present time.