nowadays celebrities earn more money than politicians .What are the reasons for this? is it a positive development or negative.

In today's world with high technology most
celebrities
earned much than those who work in the government. Social media helps these
people
to become popular in society in a short period of time. Endorsement to certain products and entertaining
people
are all trend today. It will give a good and bad effect on our society.
Firstly
, many
people
today are always facing their gadgets especially youngsters.
For example
, most of the
people
in the Philippines are now Youtubers, because many
celebrities
are having a huge income in uploading videos on youtube.
However
, though
this
trend gives them money others put some bad content in their videos that sometimes children watched. They do
this
just to get popularity and earn a lot. And
this
will tell us that, these
people
have more salary than the politician. In the near future, it will give a positive impact
to
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our economy because these
people
bring money in a form of paying taxes.
Secondly
, a certain company wanted to have a big sell and for them to be click or
people
buy their products they will use
celebrities
to endorse it and pay them in a huge amount.
For instance
, food products like chowking, it is not really famous until it will endorse by a popular celeb Alex Gonzaga who is an actress, host and vlogger who had 10 million followers. By
this
, it helps the company to sell more because of the influence of the said person.
Therefore
, some politicians tend to corrupt
people
's money because they think they deserve to be paid more than these
people
. In conclusion, though politician earns less than
celebrities
, these things help the countries economy and they can benefit from it.
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  • endorsements
  • revenue streams
  • global presence
  • diversified branding
  • income sources
  • free-market principles
  • market value
  • government budgets
  • public funds
  • public perception
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