Your local college is organizing an event on International Student’s Day. Write a letter to the organizer and say: • What topics would you like them to cover? • Why would it be interesting for students? • Ask questions about the arrangement

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing

this

letter

regard

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to the event going to be held on

Monday, 15th April 2021 on International Student’s Day. I have a suggestion that if you can ask international students to speak about issues and difficulties, which they faced while registering for our college and the value they give to

this

struggle.

This

would be more interesting to know how much other people value our country’s college and will be good for our local learners, so they can understand, how much regards our college has internationally and how other

countries’

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people are struggling to get

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admission here.

This

will be surely a

pride

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moment for us. One of my friends from South Asia

also

wants to participate in

this

event and share some details about his culture and norms. Kindly arrange the projector along with

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system for his presentation, as he wants to show some pictures and videos of their lifestyle. Yours faithfully Vishal

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