Your local college is organizing an event on International Student’s Day. Write a letter to the organizer and say: • What topics would you like them to cover? • Why would it be interesting for students? • Ask questions about the arrangement

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to the event going to be held on

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Monday, 15th April 2021 on International Student’s Day. I have a suggestion that if you can ask international students to speak about issues and difficulties, which they faced while registering for our college and the value they give to

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struggle.

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would be more interesting to know how much other people value our country’s college and will be good for our local learners, so they can understand, how much regards our college has internationally and how other

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people are struggling to get

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admission here.

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will be surely a

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moment for us. One of my friends from South Asia

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wants to participate in

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event and share some details about his culture and norms. Kindly arrange the projector along with

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system for his presentation, as he wants to show some pictures and videos of their lifestyle. Yours faithfully Vishal

Submitted by MK on Tue Mar 02 2021

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Your local college is organizing an event on International Student’s Day. Write a letter to the organizer and say: • What topics would you like them to cover? • Why would it be interesting for students? • Ask questions about the arrangement

Some people think that everyone has the right to have access to university education, and that governments should make it free for all students no matter what financial background they have. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion.

Some cultures think old people are of higher value than the youth, while other cultures value the youth more. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that in many cities around the world there are constant traffic jams. How true do you think this statement is? What measures can governments take to discourage people from owning cars.

Music has always been and continues to be the universal language of mankind. To what extent do you agree or disagree?